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Korschtal Demi-Millegniumer Old Timer

 
Joined: 19 Apr 2007 Posts: 723 Location: Stuttgart, Germany
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Posted: Sun Nov 22, 2009 9:00 pm Post subject: I'd like a slogan in German... |
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I'm working on a large van for my 1:55 scale model, and I'd like to put a slogan on the side. In english it's:
"Hello trucks, the competition is overtaking you!"
Would that be more accurately rendered as:
"Hallo LKW, sie werden von Konkurrenz überholt!"
Or:
"Hallo LKW, das Konkurrenz überholt sie!"
I know neither are gramatically accurate, feel free to correct them... _________________ Andy in Stuttgart
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Oztrainz Demi-Millegniumer Seasoned Campaigner

 
Joined: 11 Sep 2007 Posts: 739 Location: Unanderra NSW Australia
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Posted: Sun Nov 22, 2009 10:50 pm Post subject: |
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Hi Andy,
Out here in oz, all Fox Transport trucks (one of the major trucking lines) have a sticker on the back
"You are passing another Fox"
How about turning it around? To give something like:
"You are being overtaken by a train"
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"You have been passed by another train"
Perhaps that might translate easier? _________________ John Garaty
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Harald GnatterBox Centurion Old Timer
 
Joined: 20 May 2003 Posts: 249 Location: Vienna, Austria
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Posted: Mon Nov 23, 2009 7:02 am Post subject: Re: I'd like a slogan in German... |
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| Korschtal wrote: |
"Hallo LKW, sie werden von Konkurrenz überholt!"
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Hallo Lkw, Sie werden von der Konkurrenz überholt!
| Korschtal wrote: |
"Hallo LKW, das Konkurrenz überholt sie!"
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Hallo, Lkw, die Konkurrenz überholt Sie!
Nice idea btw.!  _________________ http://www.die-kiels.org/modellbahn.html |
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Korschtal Demi-Millegniumer Old Timer

 
Joined: 19 Apr 2007 Posts: 723 Location: Stuttgart, Germany
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Posted: Mon Nov 23, 2009 4:15 pm Post subject: |
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Thanks Harald. It's also nice to see my German is now at a level where only minor corrections are needed- until recently I'd make such a mess of the grammar that the rewritten version would be totally different...
It'll take a big van for that lot, fortunately I'm working on one at the moment... _________________ Andy in Stuttgart
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Matthi205 GnatterBox Centurion Raw Recruit

 
Joined: 22 Sep 2009 Posts: 106 Location: Sofia,Bulgaria
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Posted: Mon Nov 23, 2009 4:36 pm Post subject: |
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Hallo LKWs,die Konkurrenz ueberholt sie! _________________ Electric Devices have 3 statuses:On,Off and Dead. |
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KEG Demi-Millegniumer Old Timer

 
Joined: 06 Feb 2006 Posts: 723 Location: Duesseldorf
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Posted: Wed Nov 25, 2009 11:51 am Post subject: |
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It´s not a big deal to overtake a big lorry with a small van. They are only allowed 80km / h anyway. Aren´t they?
Write the slogan on a train or your bycicle and you have a political message which might make sense.
Have Fun
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Korschtal Demi-Millegniumer Old Timer

 
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Posted: Thu Nov 26, 2009 6:17 pm Post subject: |
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| KEG wrote: | It´s not a big deal to overtake a big lorry with a small van. They are only allowed 80km / h anyway. Aren´t they?
Write the slogan on a train or your bycicle and you have a political message which might make sense.
Have Fun
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Hi Juergen- the model is of a railway van. one of these as used by the Rhaetian Bahn, or near enough to it for me any way, so it will be a political message.
Mind you, putting it on my bike would be fun too... _________________ Andy in Stuttgart
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Harald GnatterBox Centurion Old Timer
 
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Korschtal Demi-Millegniumer Old Timer

 
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Posted: Sun Nov 29, 2009 12:33 pm Post subject: |
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| Harald wrote: | How about "Lkw, Bahn frei!" ...?
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I may use that on shorter stock. Thanks Harald... _________________ Andy in Stuttgart
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